Well Chapter Two was just splendid. To be concise, "less 'fucks', more philosophy". Consider my cirticisms of Heywood six feet under. The ethics of revenge were worked in quite naturally, and the way you intercut your villan's hate of traitors with Othello was really quite masterful. The plot is moving on nicely, but the extra garnish gave much added value to the main course.
More, more!
More, more!
